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    Paradise Watched
    
    Author: Morlock
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    (Added on Jul 4, 2011)
            (This month 61274 readers) (Total 80609 readers) | 
   
   
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      A young man escapes from the hectic world...  Almost | 
   
 
 
   
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    | Reviewer: 
    Nova62
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    Sep 11, 2012 | 
   
   
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        Oh if it were only that easy! But the mind sometimes, allows it to be brought to a reality. (10/10) 
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    Razor7826
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    Jul 16, 2011 | 
   
   
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        Outstanding.  The best story I've read here in a long while.   (10/10) 
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    | Reviewer: 
    Snark
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    Jul 7, 2011 | 
   
   
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        An enjoyable read, as is usual from Morlock.  Fairly well proofed and edited.  Continuing his theme of non-consensual slaves and an owner with unlimited funds.  Life is so much easier in fantasy!  A little more kinky sex and cruelty would be nice, but still entertaining.  Thank you for your work. (9/10) 
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    teleya
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    Jul 6, 2011 | 
   
   
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        Bravo. Well written, imaginative, and fun to read.   (10/10) 
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