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Look, That's Yo On TV
Author: Pagan
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(Added on Apr 6, 2002)
(This month 54447 readers) (Total 71098 readers) |
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A young girl's train is late,it's dark, there is no-one there to pick her up but some-one does and she's in big trouble. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (4.5/10) |
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Highest
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| Reviewer:
rcb
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Jan 22, 2003 |
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Grammar is a problem- story content ok (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
beta
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Apr 8, 2002 |
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A well told story, for its genre, but in need of some proofreading to make it a better read. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
CoffinNail
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Apr 7, 2002 |
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Not usually one to hand out such a low rating, but the writing here is so poor, so careless. Horrid sentence structure, poor spelling, run-on sentences that practically defy comprehension. There may be a good story in here somewhere, but I'll be damned if I can find it. (2/10)
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