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Lust
Author: Aphrodite
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(Added on Mar 10, 2002)
(This month 51616 readers) (Total 61474 readers) |
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A popular TV host fulfills his sexual desires. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (6/10) |
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| Reviewer:
luc
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Nov 26, 2002 |
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Very sweet picture of total physical and mental degradation- and it couldn't have happened to a nicer guy! i do complain however that the narrative often seems jumpy and it is not always clear to which character the pronouns refer.
This story would very much benefit from a rewrite to keep the narrative flowing so the reader doens't have to work to figure it out. And i would also add a bit more viseral detail regarding the rape while i was at it. (7/10)
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