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    The Wrong Bus
    
    Author: Red Doggie
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    (Added on Jan 2, 2010)
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     A group of people get on a bus for a fun outing but what they get is pain and terror. | 
   
 
 
   
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    | Reviewer: 
    fallafel
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    Apr 16, 2010 | 
   
   
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        Top Story, well written. I wait impatiently for new chapters (10/10) 
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    Apr 6, 2010 | 
   
   
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        Excellent story, hope there will be one or more next chapters soon... (9/10) 
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    Jan 19, 2010 | 
   
   
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        Excellent story. (9/10) 
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    | Reviewer: 
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    Jan 4, 2010 | 
   
   
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        Excellent story. Thanks. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter and the 'fun' your characters are going to have with these stupid bitches. I recommend Red Doggie's story to any BDSMLibrary readers who love sadistic violence, home invasion, and who might already be familiar with snuff tales from other authors like Woodburn. (9/10) 
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    | Reviewer: 
    jena
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    Jan 3, 2010 | 
   
   
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        Good story (8/10) 
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