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My Wedding Day
Author: Kallie Thomas
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(Added on Jan 19, 2002)
(This month 68249 readers) (Total 94805 readers) |
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A virgin bride's wedding day ends in the loss of her innocence to a vicious gang of rapists. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
headhunter
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Feb 17, 2005 |
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She's entirely too naive, yet she realizes the butt fucker wasn't using lube?
The story line is good, but it could use a little more patience, take soe time to get to the real stuff. Maybe Mike could pretend to be a captive as well? She's blindfolded - she could hear what sounds like they're abusing him as well?
Good bones to the story, it just needs a little more flesh.
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| Reviewer:
D. Atrocity
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Jul 19, 2004 |
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How do you cram that much wonderful smut into such a short story? I wish I had an ounce of your talents, my dear. The little twist if you will at the end was deliciously pulled off. (I hope I spelled that right.) I wonder, is he planning to keep her as a sex slave for his pals? Where does it go from here? (9/10)
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RubbrSpatula
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Feb 23, 2002 |
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I must be some kind of nut regarding the story endings. The writing isn't as strong here as her other work, but it's a good read. (7/10)
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Pillager
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Jan 19, 2002 |
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Wow! VERY hot action, great descriptions, and nice set up. Love the peeks into the victim's mind as she's being violated, and the violation(s) is/are terrifically arousing. Definitely recommend this one--highly! (9/10)
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