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A Delicate Balance
Author: Carmenica Diaz
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(Added on Jun 11, 2008)
(This month 177267 readers) (Total 256882 readers) |
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A young man falls under the domination of a casually cruel older ad very wealthy woman. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
rocket71
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May 21, 2010 |
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Good story.but no ending (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Dex67
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Mar 11, 2009 |
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The slow pace of development in this story makes it more dramatic and an expectation are built up in my imagination. More, pleeease! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Carmenica Diaz
(Edit) (Apr 30, 2010)
- It's coming
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| Reviewer:
bullfinch
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Oct 22, 2008 |
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Superb. Elegantly written, Ma'am. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
cbteased70
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Oct 14, 2008 |
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this story went right under my skin following what william had to go through - great story & very well written in my opinion (10/10)
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cbtboyuk
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Jul 14, 2008 |
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i absolutely disagree with the first reviewer. Sometimes a slow build up is dull and unnecessary, and one simply wishes to get to the action, but in this case i think it's a slow but enticing build up of pressure which only makes me more eager to read on.
i'm enjoying this very much - thank you Ma'am - more please! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
subjudika
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Jun 26, 2008 |
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Her writing always makes me shiver! I think I have read every D/s book and story Ms Diaz has written and she always surprises! This one is building slowly and the characters and dialogue, as usual, are so very real! As real as a fantasy story can be! I’m settling in for a thrilling ride! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
freecroma10
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Jun 24, 2008 |
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In my opinion it is an excellent introduction will be very exciting story.
(8/10)
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| Reviewer:
chuck
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Jun 24, 2008 |
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This story is well written and spends time setting up the situation, letting the plot unfold, and allowing anticipation to build. As with the other reviewer, I may adjust the rating as the story progresses into more interaction of the participants. (8/10)
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schoolboylv
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Jun 18, 2008 |
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This first part you posted does not make me want to continue reading. I've read your work before and I am always bored at the beginning. I will re-review once most is posted. (4/10)
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