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Precious Sister
Author: Jon Maddux
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(Added on Mar 23, 2008)
(This month 54456 readers) (Total 62500 readers) |
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A beautiful nun becomes the object of obsession and eventually is broken and defiled by her stalker. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Mothbrad
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Sep 17, 2008 |
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Sorry for taking so long to review this story. I though it was well written, quite well paced, and interesting. I gave a slight chuckle at the name of the nun (Agnes?! I think the only more appropriate name is 'Faith'), but aside from that, a recommended story for fans of rape. Also, I'd never understood what the 'Bible' code meant, but now I think I do :) (8/10)
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- Replied by:
JonMaddux
(Edit) (Sep 27, 2008)
- I really do appreciate your review. I know you review many stories and have no problem letting someone know if they are messing it up, so when you say something like this it really does mean a lot.
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| Reviewer:
Claire
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Apr 10, 2008 |
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Good story, well written. Can't think of any specifics to improve it except maybe make it longer. I would like to hear their confessions and penance. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
JonMaddux
(Edit) (Apr 10, 2008)
- Thank you very much!! I dont get many reviews so i never really am sure how the stories are written. So far this story seems to be the best of my little group of submissions. I had wanted to include some more authentic Catholic'isms but since i am not Catholic i didnt know enough about the rites and rituals to include them without the story sounding comical. I honestly would have loved for the story to be more authentic in that respect. Again thank you for reviewing my work and your kind words.
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