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    | Reviewer: 
    peedy
  (Edit) | Rating:  | Oct 1, 2007 |   
    |  | Hallo Muriell, deine Geschichte gefällt mir sehr gut. Lass dich nicht von einigen wenigen entmutigen und führe die Geschichte bitte weiter. LG peedy (10/10)
 
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muriell3
  (Edit)  (Oct 1, 2007)Vielen Dank !nach der ersten vernichtenden Kritik (siehe unten) war ich eigentlich nicht mehr interessiert hier zu posten. In den nächsten tagen werde ich allerdings doch den 2. Teil posten ! Ich hoffe er gefällt. Bereits heute habe ich meine neue Geschichte gepostet(leider noch nicht online).
 " Der Sklave meiner Sekretärin " viel Spass und danke für das Feedback !
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    | Reviewer: 
    shoeps
  (Edit) | Rating:  | Sep 30, 2007 |   
    |  | Hallo Muriell, sehr gute Geschichte!Bitte unbedingt fortsetzen!Lass dich nicht unterkriegen von Leuten ,die meinen  , sie hätten die einzige Sprache gepachtet , die's auf der Welt gibt!
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 Christian (10/10)
 
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muriell3
  (Edit)  (Oct 1, 2007)Vielen Dank !nach der ersten vernichtenden Kritik (siehe unten) war ich eigentlich nicht mehr interessiert hier zu posten. In den nächsten tagen werde ich allerdings doch den 2. Teil posten ! Ich hoffe er gefällt. Bereits heute habe ich meine neue Geschichte gepostet(leider noch nicht online).
 " Der Sklave meiner Sekretärin " viel Spass und danke für das Feedback !
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    | Reviewer: 
    Clevernick
  (Edit) | Rating:  | Sep 30, 2007 |   
    |  | I'm sure it's worth more than that, and I apologize for mkemse's bigotry and ignorance.  It's obvious at least that the paragraphs are done right, and that someone put some creativity into it. I don't know why anyone would stop in and downrate a story they couldn't understand, especially when warned in advance.
 And if "thr ehole world" reads it, surely it would appeal to many more people with a translation in Mandarin, spoken by double the pitiful half-billion who speak English.
 mkemse, your time would be better spent rating stories you can read.
 muriell3, I'd be happy to recommend to my German-speaking friends that they look at your story. (10/10)
 
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muriell3
  (Edit)  (Oct 1, 2007)Dear Clevernick !I wanted to thank you for your kind words! It motivated me to continue my writing! And by the way - as you see my english is not that perfect to write in this language... but i have a female friend that will translate my stories into the "world" language. Thanks Again ! Muriell
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    | Reviewer: 
    mkemse
  (Edit) | Rating:  | Sep 29, 2007 |   
    |  | remember, thr ehole world reads this, an english translation would be nice (2/10) 
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muriell3
  (Edit)  (Sep 29, 2007)Sorry mkemse - I did not know that it is forbidden to post stories in another language. So - this was the first AND last strory here on this board. very open minded oeople here .....THANK YOU ! Muriell
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