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Detective Yelina Salas Goes Down
Author: Bookmanwhb
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(Added on Aug 16, 2007)
(This month 54217 readers) (Total 64725 readers) |
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The beautiful MIAMI CSI detective comes home to find a escaped convict waiting for her and gets some payback for sending him away. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
madhatter
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Sep 16, 2007 |
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This was good and definitely hot. My only complaint is that there were a few words missing in different spots. But like I said, it was great. You should write more! :-) (8/10)
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heycarrieanne
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Aug 17, 2007 |
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Not a bad story! It had a plot and character development--always a good thing! I just wish you hadn't let Yelina enjoy it so much...I didn't like her character on CSI! LOL (8/10)
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