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Strange Encounter
Author: Excalibur
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(Added on Jul 29, 2007)
(This month 53110 readers) (Total 61152 readers) |
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the apartment offered a great view, and a little extra |
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Weighed
Average (?): (6.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
donriser
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Jul 29, 2007 |
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Definitely worth reading. The story was interesting. I suggest doing a bit of proofreading or asking someone to help with that if needed. I can't help but wonder if Eve kept the place or moved on. What would I do? Overall, I liked the story. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Mad Lews
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Jul 29, 2007 |
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More a tease than a real story, with a little spit and polish and a bit more of the old plot (or a bigger tease up to it) and you might have pulled it off. (7/10)
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