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Cyber Stalker
Author: HGZero
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(Added on May 15, 2007)
(This month 60623 readers) (Total 70759 readers) |
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You've done it before. You've googled a name. Checked out the Myspace. Read a LiveJournal or two. This story is inspired by all those bits of info we put out there. We bear our souls for a little attention and forget that it might be there years later. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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Rating:  (9.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 30, 2009 |
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As a reader of erotic fiction, you have to go through a lot of crap. Luckily, once in a while, there's a story that sticks out.
"Cyber Stalker" is such a story. Because of its inventiveness and fresh approach, because of the pace and the characterizations.
All you can do as a reader, is thank the author and hope he/she will continue writing and posting.
Thank you, HGZero.
JJ
(10/10)
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retsam6
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May 18, 2007 |
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Really enjoyed this story and its hard waiting for the next!! Hopefully he will have her perform on webcam! (10/10)
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sunnykub
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May 18, 2007 |
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Very naughty... i can't wait to read more. This sounds like every shy slaves dream (those who aren't owned that is). i do hope that you'll see fit to share more of this story with us. (9/10)
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Mad Lews
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May 18, 2007 |
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Oh Yeah! A nice little twist and imaginative too.
While the author�s knowledge of cyber and phone sex is probably due to hours of arduous research I want to be the first assure the writer that all that effort paid off. I�ll be looking forward to more of this or any other story by the esteemed HGZero.
(10/10)
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slvWriting
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May 17, 2007 |
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Very nice, very very nice. It was a very good story, that I hope you'll continue, because you've left me wanting to read some more. The only reason I'm not giving out a higher score is because I found a couple of errors, like "what with" instead of "with what" as it should have been and a "though" that should have been "through", just a typo I guess.
Keep up the good work, and please do continue this story!! (8/10)
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mr_slogan
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May 17, 2007 |
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Very well written. Great style. I look forward to reading more. (9/10)
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Sam Blythe
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May 16, 2007 |
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Good job. Looking forward to your next update. I like the sense of anticipation and mystery about what's going to happen next. (9/10)
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Masterdarkone2000
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May 16, 2007 |
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Great Story... I look forward to seeing what you will do with the story. Keep up the OUTSTANDING work.
(10/10)
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rope_monkey
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May 16, 2007 |
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good pacing, and I really like the 'chatlog' approach to telling the characters' online interactions. Looking forward to next chapter! (9/10)
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sub61
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May 16, 2007 |
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I really enjoyed this....I can't wait to read the continuation!! (9/10)
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C_Lakewood
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May 16, 2007 |
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This is a good one. It begins a little slowly,
but that's because the author takes the trouble
to set the stage and to tell us some things about
the two major characters. Part 1 ends with a
scene that is both hot and clever. So far it
is well-crafted and cleanly written (except for
a few grammatical errors). The only major fault
is that I think the narrator's stalk is too easy;
plausibility would have been improved if there
had been one or more difficulties to overcome.
I have given it an 8, but I can always come back
and revise this score. I do look forward to
further parts.
(8/10)
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chksng19
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May 16, 2007 |
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A lovely piece, full of promise and the opportunity to continue to tease and please. Nicely written! (9/10)
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