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The Rose Garden
Author: Wet April
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(Added on May 7, 2007)
(This month 50270 readers) (Total 58099 readers) |
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Dad punishes me for not keeping up with my chores. |
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Average (?):  (4.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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May 9, 2007 |
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I believed English might not be your native tongue, and was basing your review on that, but found that to be not true.
The story you tell is OK there is much looking into the soul of the story teller, and interesting happenings.
Generally, your word usage is very good. There are a few problems here and there (such as capitalizing the first letter of each sentence, for example). An English-speaking editor could help fix that, and make your story easier to read. (4/10)
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