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The Fallen Angel
Author: Middnight Star
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(Added on Apr 11, 2007)
(This month 51565 readers) (Total 61305 readers) |
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A wounded Angel finds herself falling into the depths of hell. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
delish
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May 8, 2011 |
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I think that it is not quite poetic enough to be as short as it is, but I do think this is quite good, and I enjoyed the note from the author about the story's origin. A common grammatical error I noticed is the use of "taunt" in place of "taut". Taunt means to aggressively mock someone or something, generally with an eye towards a fight; taut means stretched tightly. I don't know why, but this one always gets to me and knocks away the atmosphere. Speaking of atmosphere, it is quite well done in this tale. I recommend this as a solidly enjoyable story, and a quick read, and the protagonist is an actual fallen angel. Awesome. (8/10)
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DeGrinch
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Apr 13, 2007 |
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Well done. Your writing is superb. Myself, I see the prince of darkness as enjoying a bit more pain in his conquest. (9/10)
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Mad Lews
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Apr 12, 2007 |
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An interesting melding of poetic prose that provides the perfect tone for this tale. My only complaint would be its abbreviated length. (8/10)
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