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Remorse
Author: mehitabela
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(Added on Apr 6, 2007)
(This month 50933 readers) (Total 59908 readers) |
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a slave regrets the series of impetuous events that lead to her ultimate punishment |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
Sextoymaker
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Apr 9, 2007 |
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Please continue with this. It is a good net short story and deserves a solid read. I particularly liked the writing style. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Cagemaster1000
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Apr 8, 2007 |
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Romantic hum? So rare...in these days (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Snark
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Apr 8, 2007 |
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An enjoyable story that could be greatly improved with careful editing. Let a story get "cold" for a few days, then re-read it with an editor's eye. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
heycarrieanne
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Apr 7, 2007 |
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I liked the theme of your story, but you have typos abounding and you really need to learn about paragraphs! You also have the girl sounding like a character from the 18th century in the beginning with the words you use. That being said, I think the story idea was good and with a lot of cleaning up, this would be a 9 or 10 story, (5/10)
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