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    Author: blemished2007
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    (Added on Jan 4, 2007)
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    The beginning of a project I want to write if my feedback is good. Please email me with your opinions. | 
   
 
 
   
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    mkemse
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    Jan 23, 2009 | 
   
   
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        enjoyable to read (7/10) 
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    Feb 19, 2007 | 
   
   
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        The chapters do not flow together at all. The story line is not making any sense. Just poorly written. (2/10) 
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    Feb 19, 2007 | 
   
   
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        just to get the average down  to manny stars for such an short post. (1/10) 
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    | Reviewer: 
    blmished
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    Feb 17, 2007 | 
   
   
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        Scarcely have I been so 'moved' by a piece of fiction, as I am by this. Lovely style and plenty of meaty story on the away, I bet. I really appreciate these growing tales. Fabulos. (10/10) 
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    | Reviewer: 
    makito
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    Jan 27, 2007 | 
   
   
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        Fabulous!  Tell us about the three others.  Thanks. (10/10) 
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    | Reviewer: 
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    Jan 8, 2007 | 
   
   
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        A very good start.  I like the idea you are generating in your "draft", it's very promising. (8/10) 
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