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Dark Day For Two Sisters
Author: ynyn
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(Added on Oct 17, 2006)
(This month 57943 readers) (Total 77077 readers) |
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Two young teens arrive home from school,only to meet up with an intruder who wants more than money. |
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Average (?):  (5.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Feb 22, 2007 |
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lacks any real quality, lie a teenie bopper writing (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
ElectricBadger
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Oct 18, 2006 |
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Good story, moves along decently with a solid plot. I'd love to see a bit more innovation (a twist or surprise, something more than a basic rape scene) and I think developing the story by actions and emotions, showing what happens, would improve it over just listing actions. Great effort, though, and I look forward to reading more! (6/10)
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