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Penny\'s Cage.
Author: jan311648
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(Added on Mar 23, 2006)
(This month 108642 readers) (Total 140629 readers) |
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A young woman is quietly abducted from a suburban street in a provincial town for reasons never explained to her but which become apparent over time. The story begins about eighteen months into her imprisonment. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
pttwyn
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May 8, 2011 |
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Well written and detailed. The strangeness of transformation are hard to make seem plausible,I like your handling to make it seem ordinary. (10/10)
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trainer81
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Apr 21, 2006 |
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I like animal transformation stories very much. In words this story didn't bore me one second. I plan to read the 2ed chapter shortly. I give A+ for this work. (7/10)
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H Dean
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Apr 7, 2006 |
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This is the first time I have ever been unsure what number rating to give to a story. This was quite an odd read and I am still left wondering what the whole point to the story was. Just the same, it kept my attention in a strangely erotic fashion. Now, I want to know what the whole point to this story was. So, bring on the next chapter! (9/10)
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sheilagirl
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Mar 30, 2006 |
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I sense that this is the only chapter you intended but still I'm hungry for more. I have always loved the humiliation factor myself and you have described it brilliantly here. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
jan311648
(Edit) (Mar 31, 2006)
- Many thanks for your kind remarks, and you'll be pleased to know that a sequel, set sometime in Penny's future, is almost ready for posting!
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chksng19
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Mar 26, 2006 |
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A very well told and detailed story, leading us through many facets of the character. (9/10)
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Sklaventreiber
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Mar 24, 2006 |
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was very pleased with the story. (8/10)
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heycarrieanne
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Mar 23, 2006 |
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This was a very interesting story. I am curious to see where you go with it. The only thing I can complain about is that you do have some typos. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
jan311648
(Edit) (Mar 31, 2006)
- Sorry about the typos; I write using one file format and then copy to a .rtf format. Msybe some errors are creeping in there.
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mkemse
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Mar 23, 2006 |
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need another chapter or 2 to pass real judgement would have been nice also had you not started the story 18 months into her abduction some early preview would have been nice (7/10)
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- Replied by:
sheilagirl
(Edit) (Mar 30, 2006)
- I thought she handled the flashbacks nicely as a preview of what happened before. It is a technique authors often use and she did it effectively I think. Of course I agree more detail would have been a plus. I would strongly agree if she hadn't flashed back at all.
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jan311648
(Edit) (Mar 31, 2006)
- Thanks for your comments, but I chose to begin the story eighteen months into Penny's imprisonment for dramatic effect. It is possible, of course, that a chapter and verse explanation of the actual abduction would turn you on more than it does me!
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