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Julie\'s Pain
Author: Master Matthew
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(Added on Mar 15, 2006)
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Julie is bound and tormented as he whispers on her ear what they will do to her |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Mar 26, 2006 |
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While some minor problems have been pointed out, and easy to correct. This is a story that I would love to see more chapters of. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
MasterMatthew
(Edit) (Mar 26, 2006)
- Hi La Toya, Thank you for the review. Whislt I am not sure if there will be more of this specific story, the main character should return.
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| Reviewer:
Koolaid
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Mar 18, 2006 |
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I was also disturbed by exaggerations. Otherwise, relentless and deliciously sadistic poetry. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
MasterMatthew
(Edit) (Mar 19, 2006)
- Hi Koolaid, thanks for the review.
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| Reviewer:
jip
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Mar 16, 2006 |
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Be careful not to exagerate. The 200 kg bag is an example. An average sand or cement bag is already very heavy and only 50 kgs. Outside this detail, I have my toughts as it is not very believable. (5/10)
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- Replied by:
MasterMatthew
(Edit) (Mar 16, 2006)
- Hi jip, Thanks for the review. I must admit I was not really trying for absolute realism (mind you I have seen someone in exactly that position with a 200kg weight supended from their breasts - not for very long though I must admit). Once again, thanks for the review. M
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Mar 15, 2006 |
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Finely crafted story. Beautiful, detailed word pictures make the story hot and sexy! Can't wait for the next section. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
MasterMatthew
(Edit) (Mar 16, 2006)
- Hi chksng19, thanks for the review. I don't really have any plans to do more on that specific topic; but Julie is a favourite character of mine so you might see more of her in other stories.
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Mar 15, 2006 |
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increably hot, well detailed hope you ad more real soon (10/10)
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- Replied by:
MasterMatthew
(Edit) (Mar 16, 2006)
- Hi mkemse, thanks for the great review! I should be posting more soon, but probably not on that speific story. Thanks again, M
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