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    Jack\'s Submission
    
    Author: Masterinc
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    (Added on Feb 6, 2006)
            (This month 56982 readers) (Total 77536 readers) | 
   
   
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    The story of how Jack Short became his wife\'s sub and sex toy. | 
   
 
 
   
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     Weighed
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    Average 
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    Highest 
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    Lowest 
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    | Reviewer: 
    mkemse
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    Feb 22, 2006 | 
   
   
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        altho i am not into Femdom, nice to see a story from a female point of view rather then a man's just for a cge, i still prefer maledom, but it was a good story (8/10) 
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    Feb 15, 2006 | 
   
   
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        Good story, and the spread leg rail device was diabolical. (8/10) 
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    Feb 11, 2006 | 
   
   
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        The concept is excellent and the detailing of the punishments were well thought out. I didn't notice too many typos, although with a story that long, there are bound to be some. The length of the story had me speed reading through some of it, which is probably my only complaint. (9/10) 
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