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The Task
Author: Syren
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(Added on Jul 10, 2005)
(This month 62657 readers) (Total 87339 readers) |
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A young submissive is given a daunting task by her cyber-Master. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
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JimmyJump
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Feb 9, 2009 |
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Very much like a story about a mute, as nothing is said by the girl, but it works perfectly.
Well written, satisfying tale.
JJ (9/10)
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mkemse
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Oct 12, 2008 |
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great story great job, great humiliation (9/10)
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bigcat
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Sep 18, 2006 |
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Good hot erotic tale of consensual submission. (9/10)
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Ruby
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Jul 16, 2005 |
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For lovers of humilation, abuse, pain, fantasy rape, with the girl treated like nothing more than a fuck toy, this is story to put on your list.
Note: An editing refresh would pop this tale up another notch. It's missing the emotions behind the actions. (7/10)
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Jacen
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Jul 15, 2005 |
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The editing is terrible, with numerous examples of 'he' instead of 'she' and worse slip-ups. The writing was also in a rather quick 'he fucked her, and it was good' style. And, of course, the Young tag is used incorrectly. Worth reading, yes, but not a masterpiece by any means. (7/10)
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BDSgirl
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Jul 15, 2005 |
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i liked the idea, and mostly liked the writing, the lack of editing let it down. (7/10)
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PallMall
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Jul 12, 2005 |
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What a great start - thx! This is real humiliation - make her a public fucktoy - pls add more chapters soon! (10/10)
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bobanddianne
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Jul 12, 2005 |
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Absolutely delightful... a true work of art.
What more can we say? (10/10)
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La Toya
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Jul 11, 2005 |
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A very well done story. I was sad to see the words "the end" as this would have made a nice longer story. Whith her being given other tasks to do. (9/10)
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LordVetinari
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Jul 11, 2005 |
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An interesting fantasy, well-told, though not enough torture to be fully to my taste. (8/10)
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XtremeInk
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Jul 10, 2005 |
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The good:
Excellent read. Love the ideas behind to torture. Very hot.
The not so good:
Needs editing, but hell, I can relate to that!
(9/10)
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The_ZoRo
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Jul 10, 2005 |
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Excelent story. It had my attention right from the beginning and didn't get go once. I am pleased :) (9/10)
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