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Curiosity Killed the Cat
Author: Pallidan
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(Added on May 31, 2005)
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A woman's curiosity with her neighbors lead to her own submission. |
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Average (?):  (4/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Dec 25, 2006 |
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very repetitive over other stories, go from quality not quantity, write good stories not stories just to post them (4/10)
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jbowler65
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Sep 9, 2005 |
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The content wasn't bad, but the author needs to find an editor to review the story. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
rebelfan1
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Aug 4, 2005 |
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Pallidan continues to post the same plot over and over again. His/her writing and gramatical skills are below a grammer school level. Please learn how to write or find someone to edit your stories. Otherwise, stop posting them because there actually get in the way of searching for good stories. (1/10)
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bob_aganoush
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Jun 4, 2005 |
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You need to work on your grammar and writing style, it's so bad that it makes your stories unreadable. You've got the basics of a good plot in your stories, but you need to improve the grammar. (3/10)
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Lady Lance
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Jun 2, 2005 |
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Ow, my eyes.
Please use proper punctuation! It's there for a reason and makes fics so much easier to read. It seems like there is a decent premise, but I can't be sure since it's too difficult to read without quotation marks. (5/10)
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Rocky
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Jun 2, 2005 |
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One of my pet peeves is dialogue without quotation marks...you know, those little " " thingies that indicate someone is speaking? To be honest, I couldn't get through the first five paragraphs because of that. If you revise the work, let us know and I'll reconsider my rating. (5/10)
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