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Trapped
Author: Lofwyrkp
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(Added on May 4, 2005)
(This month 101568 readers) (Total 139205 readers) |
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A woman is turned into a very unusual slave. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
Rating:  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
bmtphoenix
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Aug 13, 2007 |
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EXCELLENT story. I would love to read more. The only thing keeping it from being a 10 is a lack of response from the victim....but still an excellent read. (9/10)
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delish
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May 7, 2005 |
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If denial is to your taste, I'd recommend this one. Short, but well composed. A couple of spelling errors, but nothing awful or unforgivable. I'd love to hear more of her story, to be sure. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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May 5, 2005 |
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nice job hope there is more to be posted (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Mad Lews
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May 5, 2005 |
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A very well written short story, imaginative, and yes cruel, but with a certain sophistication, not the base crudity one so often finds in these stories. Well done! (9/10)
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BDSM_Tourguide
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May 5, 2005 |
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Good story. I hope there's more to come. (7/10)
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MrEd
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May 4, 2005 |
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Too cruel doesn't seem like a fair criticism for a story of this type where that is in fact the point. The point is well made in an imaginative and well written short story. (9/10)
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bracemaiden
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May 4, 2005 |
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I agree with rce - unusual, which is a good thing, but a bit too cruel for my taste. I'ld rather the main character got some sexual release from time to time when she behaved. (7/10)
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rce
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May 4, 2005 |
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A somewhat unusual idea, though a bit too cruel for my taste. (7/10)
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