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Cuckoo
Author: EngineX
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(Added on Jun 16, 2004)
(This month 161460 readers) (Total 200719 readers) |
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Amanda becomes the unwilling host for a pair of wealthy human Cuckoos. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
drayman
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Aug 9, 2004 |
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I am really enjoying such a well written tale. The idea of the rich couple taking an intelligent woman and reducing her to simply a breeder of their offspring and also making use of her 'talents' to satisfy their lust appeals to my fantasy. It is after all, only a story!! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
EngineX
(Edit) (Aug 11, 2004)
- Thanks for the complementary remarks. Hope you like the ending.
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| Reviewer:
charly
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Aug 3, 2004 |
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i like the story very much. specially the idea of a group of people conspirating in controlling the mind of a poor girl.
i hope youŽll continue the story much more.
please don`t make sir peter`s wife behave like a slut, give her and the housekeeper a more disciplinating rol, less sexulize, and more cruel. and please make amanda suffer for the lose of the child, been groth by another mother.
i`m sorry for the spelling mistakes. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
EngineX
(Edit) (Aug 11, 2004)
- It's not my intention for Vivian's role in the story to be TOO sexual, although the enforced lesbian play is part of her natural cruelty. Sir Peter's wife could never be a slut! She's an aristocrat after all... It's Amanda who must learn to recognise herself as the slut...
Pleased you're enjoying the story. Hope you like the ending now it's finished.
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| Reviewer:
littleslut
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Jul 26, 2004 |
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very good and i hope that this story continues to develop (9/10)
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- Replied by:
EngineX
(Edit) (Jul 26, 2004)
- There are about four more chapters to come to finish off the story...
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| Reviewer:
bcsollte
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Jul 25, 2004 |
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I really like this story; the slowly developing mind control is terrific. Can't wait to see how Sir Peter escapes his confrontation with the constabulary (Prologue).
BZ (9/10)
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- Replied by:
EngineX
(Edit) (Jul 26, 2004)
- Glad you're enjoying it. My aim has been to tell the story of Amanda's slow demise one step at a time to build the tension and improve the plausibilty of the story... There's a little way to go before you'll find out how the problem of the prologue is resolved!
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| Reviewer:
Mobius
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Jun 24, 2004 |
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I very much loved this story. And I hope it will continue. So Far it has held my interest a feat that is becoming more harder as I am becoming a little jaded with lesser quality work.
Keep up the good work and am looking forward to part 5,6,7 etc
PS what the hell is a cuckoo other than a clock? (9/10)
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- Replied by:
EngineX
(Edit) (Jul 12, 2004)
- Pleased you're enjoying it. Part six is now submitted so should be posted in the near future. A Cuckoo (as well as being a clock) is a British (and maybe more widespread) species of garden bird with an interesting parasitical breeding technique not entirely disimilar to the technique in the story...
See http://www.garden-birds.co.uk/birds/cuckoo.htm and you'll see what I mean.
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jun 18, 2004 |
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it was a good read but nothing exceptional (7/10)
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- Replied by:
EngineX
(Edit) (Jun 19, 2004)
- It's not all posted yet, several more chapters to follow. Maybe you'll like the later ones better...
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