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    Japanese Adventure
    
    Author: Vlad Potemkin
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    (Added on May 17, 2004)
            (This month 50948 readers) (Total 62042 readers) | 
   
   
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    Short story about a Japanese-American tennis player who returns to Tokyo for a summer session. Her next door neighbors roll out the welcome ropes. | 
   
 
 
   
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    Average 
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    Highest 
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    Lowest 
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    | Reviewer: 
    bracemaiden
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    May 26, 2004 | 
   
   
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             My real issue with this story was the codes.  More explicitly, the lack thereof.  I was hoping for some consentual bondage and love, not a (heavy) gang (M+/f) rape (n/c). (6/10) 
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        - Replied by: 
VladPotemkin
  (Edit)  (May 27, 2004)
 
        - Well, I forgot to put codes in and that was the moderator's selection. Doesn't seem like a reason to give a story poor rating. Does seem like a reason to adjust the codes, which I will try to do.
 
       
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    | Reviewer: 
    Faibhar
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    May 21, 2004 | 
   
   
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        Many readers are sure to say "Domo" after reading this short-but-sweet story.  Concise, yet well written, "J.A." makes for good reading. (8/10) 
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