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To Have and Hold
Author: Baer-chen
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(Added on Apr 17, 2003)
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Bounty Hunter captures and helps a client torture a man's object of desire. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jul 29, 2004 |
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i realy enjoyed the story, this is my type of genere (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
boccaccio2000g
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Apr 19, 2003 |
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A good story, virtually error-free in terms of spelling, grammar, etc, if a bit extreme for my tastes. But somehow it didn't really light my fire. I think the author might spend more time describing the appearance of his characters -- whose physical appearance is, for me, the font of erotic pleasure from which everything else flows. A second, more bothersome flaw is the great number of over-long paragraphs. Maybe it's just me but I find long paragraphs very difficult to read on a video screen, perhaps more so than I might on paper. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
baerchen24
(Edit) (Apr 19, 2003)
- Thank you for your comments they are appreciated!
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