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The Trainer
Author: Woolfighter
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(Added on Apr 3, 2003)
(This month 89440 readers) (Total 134973 readers) |
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Petra Williams has got problems with her dog, but not for long. Soon everybody will be happy again. Everybody? |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
jls152
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Jun 27, 2010 |
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So far so good. Your spelling and grammar is distracting. Have an English speaking proof reader assist you. You have good potential. The story is developing nicely. I would be glad to proof read for you. And I would be good, too. (8/10)
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MistressKali
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Jul 5, 2004 |
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Normally, I can't get to the end of stories with poor grammar and spelling. My editing mind prevents Me from enjoying them and I give up. This story I actually read from beginning to end, because the concept was sound. Find yourself an English speaking editor and there would be no stopping you. (7/10)
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lex ludite
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Jan 31, 2004 |
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Normally I would refuse to exert the energy necessary to wade through a work that obviously is not being written in the author's native tongue. However this particular author has an inventiveness that transcends language barriers. For this reason I will depart from the standard rating system. Believe me, this author is worth going the extra mile for, he can generate serious heat. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
woolfighter
(Edit) (Jan 31, 2004)
- Thank you, Mr. Ludite, really thank you. It only proves your intelligence that you are able to see through my lousy english to find some hidden pearl.
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hungryslave
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Jan 29, 2004 |
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It was absolutely impossible for me to sit still during parts of this story - and I did not make it to the end without begging for respite. Thank You!! (10/10)
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frenchgus
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Nov 1, 2003 |
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thank you ! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Malice
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Jun 24, 2003 |
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I hope your still continueing this story.. even if it seems to move exceedingly fast at times it's still really well done. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
woolfighter
(Edit) (Jun 25, 2003)
- Thx for your support. Yes the story will go on, and again yes it is too fast in the beginning, sorry.
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| Reviewer:
sadomaster
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Apr 12, 2003 |
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this is a very good story.
waiting for more to come ;-) (10/10)
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- Replied by:
woolfighter
(Edit) (Apr 14, 2003)
- Thx for your rating.
Yes there is more to come, friends, neighbors, family, etc.
C U
Woolfighter
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| Reviewer:
emmaadmirer
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Apr 7, 2003 |
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Wuff! ( translation: I hope you will continue :-) ) (9/10)
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- Replied by:
woolfighter
(Edit) (Apr 8, 2003)
- Emmaadmirer your comments are VERY VERY welcome, the sequel is on the way.
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| Reviewer:
drake7
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Apr 5, 2003 |
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The structure of this story makes it too hard to read. (3/10)
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- Replied by:
woolfighter
(Edit) (Apr 8, 2003)
- I thought it was simple and a little too fast, sorry for that.
C U
Woolfighter
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| Reviewer:
georgiagin
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Apr 3, 2003 |
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i love stories where the female is turned into a dog...this was right up my alley....i'm not into the beastiality...just the transformation... (8/10)
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- Replied by:
woolfighter
(Edit) (Jan 31, 2004)
- I hope the light bestiality will not dissapoint you.
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| Reviewer:
isolomon
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Apr 3, 2003 |
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Nice. An interesting variant. A little too fast. I think it should take a day or two to get her to the state she is in. Reasonable grammar and spelling. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
woolfighter
(Edit) (Apr 8, 2003)
- You are right about the timing, but I had her stripped to soon,and what to do with her if not start playing.
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