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Making The Chef Pay
Author: Powerone
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(Added on Feb 16, 2003)
(This month 58279 readers) (Total 78743 readers) |
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A disgruntled employee holds Cleo for two days in her restauņant. Her body is used for his pleasure. Cooking instruments were never meant to be used like this. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
greeneyes
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Mar 8, 2004 |
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I have read a lot of your work and I am always impressed. You are a great talent. And, as a note to those who sit and count every small grammar mistake, I think you are missing the point. If perfect grammar is what gets you hot, then get a life. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 18, 2004 |
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Please continue it, so far it is great (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
RTNYMaster
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Feb 18, 2003 |
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Syntax, grammar, incomplete sentences...a chore to read. Not worth the effort required. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
peachmellon
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Feb 18, 2003 |
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I enjoyed it.. very well written.. i am looking for more on this story.. yes i enjoyed it.. and thank you so much for writing it.. you had Paragraphs, the spelling was a A+,, your ideas flowed well and smooth, not choppy at all. thank you so much
bye for now (8/10)
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- Replied by:
RTNYMaster
(Edit) (Feb 18, 2003)
- I counted at least 10 errors in punctuation, grammar, word usage etc. in three lines, no wonder you thought this story was well written.
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| Reviewer:
anguisette
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Feb 16, 2003 |
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Some syntax and grammar issues, but I really like the storyline. Please write more!! (8/10)
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