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Ellen's Fall
Author: Vance
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(Added on Jan 24, 2003)
(This month 66370 readers) (Total 102299 readers) |
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A prudish executive secretary deals with her divorce by taking some risks and pays the price by becoming a slut. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Mar 22, 2004 |
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i don;t know, maybe my taste in story is odd as oppsed to alot of people, i tend to rate stories high that other rate low and then just the opposite<br>i enjoyed it what can i say (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
vance
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Jun 16, 2003 |
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Excellent story line...anxious for 3rd part. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Drax
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Jan 27, 2003 |
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The story is a nice begining but vague. Lets hope for a good 2nd act (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
BDSM_Tourguide
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Jan 27, 2003 |
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Not too bad so far. I look forward to seeing more on this story.
(6/10)
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| Reviewer:
drake7
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Jan 25, 2003 |
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As some of the other reviewers said, the story does leave the reader a bit unsatisfied. More importantly however, the storyline is one that is getting a bit thin. I have seen so many stories lately about blackmail and photographs I am to the point where I am begining to expect the target of the blackmail attempt to tell the blackmailer to do what he wants with the photos, she doesn't give a damn. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
Master_c
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Jan 25, 2003 |
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A great start on the story. But, it stopped to soon. Need to have more of an ending. Maybe some type of sex to finish it off, with more pictures. I am giving a satisfactory rating, but may change it as the story unfolds. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
emmaadmirer
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Jan 24, 2003 |
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A very good start! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Powerone
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Jan 24, 2003 |
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Too short. I was expecting a little more sex a little more action. Let's see if chapter two delivers on the promise of chapter one.
(5/10)
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