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    Author: Kallie Thomas
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    (Added on Dec 22, 2002)
            (This month 62181 readers) (Total 88911 readers) | 
   
   
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    A man's failure to repay a loan shark provokes a visit to his home. | 
   
 
 
   
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    mkemse
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    Dec 31, 2003 | 
   
   
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        well established author, is very consistant in writings (9/10) 
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    Apr 17, 2003 | 
   
   
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        Excellent story as always -- Keep writing Kallie. (9/10) 
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    Terry Gabriola
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    Jan 14, 2003 | 
   
   
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        More good descriptive stuff - this author can write well, sure - but a prime case where the boy's mental / psychological state could be explored to good effect. (7/10) 
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    | Reviewer: 
    veru_skjava
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    Dec 27, 2002 | 
   
   
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        I completely agree with Powerone. Very well written as usual for this author.  Please note that it is fantasy, fiction and as such is in fact coded appropriately as snuff. (9/10) 
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    | Reviewer: 
    Powerone
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    Dec 22, 2002 | 
   
   
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        I have been reading all of Kallie's stories and they are excellent.  Lately they seemed to be all the same, just a different story line.  I see that this has changed.  Excellent story, I am sure some will not like the ending, but you must remember, it is only a story. (9/10) 
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